My Poem

[AoIbHeAnN]

Girl on a deathbed:
The light shines in on me,
doctors looking away,
feeling lightheaded and cramps,
wanting to run away.

but the bright lights are too strong,
whispering to me,
i can hear people calling my name,
but i just want too sleep.

My mother listens worried,
to what the doctors say,
there is silence,
then sobs,
this happens every day.

I try to tell her i'm alright,
but my mouth just won't speak,
nobody tries too speak to me,
i feel lonely and weak.

Each breath i take,
takes me away,
from my family and friends,
my home back home.

Then something goes wrong,
i can feel it in me,
something just goes,
and then i go to sleep.

hope you like it.

[josh]

thats really good

i like it

[AoIbHeAnN]

thanks! I'm only 11 but i love writing...(sports/horse riding too lol)
here's another one:

Take Me Away:

Oh, take me away to my own place
where my heart can leep
and race
jumping around from side to side,
a friend in which i can confide,

Oh take me away to my own place,
where the sun shines,
sleeping animals snore gently
from time to time.

oh take me away to my own place,
where friends come dropping slow
no names or bullies on the way,
how I wish for a place like that.

how about that one?

[maddie]

(josh-too tired to change acounts) 

that ones great too

[AoIbHeAnN]

thanks

girl in blue:

oh girl in blue,
how i love you,
each step you take,
devotes me to you,
your breath on my neck,
your eyes on mine,
your tender love is devine,
oh girl in  blue,
i'm devoted to you,
but how i wish
you loved me too.

aoibheann!!

[josh]

thats a good one also

[AoIbHeAnN]

 

 i know they dont really ryhme
but somtimes i do it just for feeling not rymhing


about me:

about me?
what can i say?
i'm as normal as you,
this i say

but hey i have moments
mainly in public
running around
face sick of it

friends not friends
fights and quarrels
bffz to worst enimeis
a dhia nach mhór na féile!!!

about me?
ha no
how can i fit all this
on a piece of paper?

apple and orange:

the apple and orange
lay up a tree
singing songs about thee,
when suddenly the apple goes wrong
sings an awful crude song.
the orange blows it
and shouts out loud
DON'T CALL ME ORANGE
YOU GREEN SPROUT!!!!






aoibheann