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« on: September 22, 2009, 11:24:57 AM »

This is just a short story i wrote off the top of my head Wink lol enjoy Wink

Blood Bath

The horse danced below me. Snorting and snatching at the bit. I kept my hands strong and firm on the reins. I could see the enemy forming a large circle around us. They must out number us ten to one. There's no chance of us surviving this. We have come to the end of the road. All my life I have gone out to try and please my father. He trained me along with my older brother to be champions. To capture the world. My brother became great and i was left forgotten. Nothing more than a officer. A pawn. Replaceable. My life will be no loss to him.
The enemy advanced at a flying gallop. I raised my sword in my right hand and everything began to slow down. I pointed my sword forwards and felt the whoiole army gallop towards their ends. I sped through the crowds taking as many with me as i could. Until i fell from my horse.
Pain took other my body but i looked up at the sky. A father smiled down at me. "I've done your work." i muttered before leaving this world.
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me + Mole yr 8 leavers... like 2 years ago Wink
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Mel, Me, Hope, Charlie Wink last year
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Charlie, me Hope Halloween Wink
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me + charlie b4 liquid Wink
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« Reply #1 on: September 23, 2009, 11:09:11 AM »

you only write deppressing stories.
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Ruby, ruby, ruby, ruby!
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« Reply #2 on: September 23, 2009, 12:55:22 PM »

they r not ALL depressing. If you bovered 2 read my other stories u would no that!
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me + Mole yr 8 leavers... like 2 years ago Wink
http://i48.tinypic.com/2w6rzb8.jpg
Mel, Me, Hope, Charlie Wink last year
http://i50.tinypic.com/20k6rg4.jpg
Charlie, me Hope Halloween Wink
http://i46.tinypic.com/2liv9ud.jpg
me + charlie b4 liquid Wink
http://i49.tinypic.com/30w3whg.jpg
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« Reply #3 on: September 24, 2009, 11:49:00 AM »

yeah, yeah.
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